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| For this pair of photos I wanted to show how some kids think it is all fun and games by rocking their chairs back and forth, but once you fall things aren't so fun anymore because you can seriously hurt yourself. |
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| In these two I thought it would be cool to show kids running around because thats what they do. Kids have a whole bunch of energy that they need to exert. |
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| In this set I thought it would be cool to show some of the dub things kids do in clas when they get bored and are done with their work. |
I think this concept was pretty original and creative, it’s so simple yet something no one in the class has done. I think it would’ve been better if your model exaggerated his facial expressions a little making it look more realistic. One thing I would’ve improved is the color of his shirt, because it blends too much with the background. Or, the lighting should’ve been different so you wouldn’t have to look so hard to see the difference between his shirt and the background.
ReplyDeleteAgain, even though these pictures didn’t need much editing because they were studio shots he should’ve cloned stamped on the bottom so you weren’t able to see the foot prints or any other white marks on the pictures. All in all, without its minor flaws I really like the concept of this diptych, it’s easy to understand and humorous as well.